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This topic was created in the Pisces forum by pisces on Tuesday, June 20, 2006 and has 28 replies.
So much I could say but its all felt today so the words won't spill I want you to know I would die, and yes I would kill for you. Its all I have and its allot to me to give you my heart the rest before was a small part. Been here along time so it seams you are a dream compared to the rest you are the best you stand the tests of time I am yours you are mine. Poetry just for me
i liked it 
Sanks GEM 
Wait a minute branh I have a morbid one for you
Wait a minute branh I have a morbid one for you
They are not around but we?re alive
The bodies found
No one survived
Its been so long since Id seen your face
But now you?re gone
I must erase
Wish it was me lying there
Without a care
I?d take you?re place??.
I am dead without you near my heart
Without a soul I have no face
The pain is gone now the numb is here
I can?t move on
I am so scared
Wish it was me lying there
Without a care
I?d take you?re place??.
But you are dead
The bodies found
No one survived
Its been so long since Id seen your face
But now you?re gone
I must erase
Wish it was me lying there
Without a care
I?d take you?re place??.
I am dead without you near my heart
Without a soul I have no face
The pain is gone now the numb is here
I can?t move on
I am so scared
Wish it was me lying there
Without a care
I?d take you?re place??.
But you are dead
Pisces did u write that?
Yes Heh heh
I?d take you?re place??.
You're = your
You're = your
i liked it...poetry is an artform, and in this case you are just playing with words to create a thought or feeling....it is a little dark, but it makes it more interesting to me.....u conveyed the emotions well.....
so there u go Pisces
an opinion from a GEM and VIRGO.....
an opinion from a GEM and VIRGO.....
Nope don't feel that way, the whole thing just popped into my head one day when I was thinking about the survivers of a plane crash
*Nope don't feel that way, the whole thing just popped into my head one day when I was thinking about the survivers of a plane crash
-only from a Pisces.....u women are fantastic
-only from a Pisces.....u women are fantastic
I have some advanced poetry but not for you
Ok.
Can you put some of yous please please please!
Can you put some of yous please please please!
Thats DEEEEP M Ldy! Had to read it twice! I like it though, very similar to what I write
I can't remember how this poem I wrote went so this is a mix of a couple I can rememer & I will add the real one later Enjoy!
Stubbled and fell, fear seared high as her one light dies, she cries, no comforting arms.
For long this joyful painless bliss held her soul & gave her mind a kiss, forgetting to live where reality lies she stubbles deeper body in ecstasy while her sleeping mind fries.
Her sight not for real with a heart that can?t heal in care do you dare wipe her tear that?s a start the rest up ahead is a bigger part.
I can't remember how this poem I wrote went so this is a mix of a couple I can rememer & I will add the real one later
Enjoy!Stubbled and fell, fear seared high as her one light dies, she cries, no comforting arms.
For long this joyful painless bliss held her soul & gave her mind a kiss, forgetting to live where reality lies she stubbles deeper body in ecstasy while her sleeping mind fries.
Her sight not for real with a heart that can?t heal in care do you dare wipe her tear that?s a start the rest up ahead is a bigger part.
roses are red
violets are blue
i cry
boo hoo
violets are blue
i cry
boo hoo
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was this suppose to be part of the rap
Yeah hah haha
- You have a very imaginative yet understandable style of writing branh, I really lved it!
us - Humm maybe in a while I'll put some up (when you guys are all sleeping)
was this suppose to be part of the rap
Yeah hah haha
- You have a very imaginative yet understandable style of writing branh, I really lved it!
us - Humm maybe in a while I'll put some up (when you guys are all sleeping)
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here is my smile for u lot
Smile thou ur heart is aching
smile even thou its breaking
although a tear may be ever so near
thats the time you must keep on smiling,
smile whats the use in crying
you'll find that life is still worthwhile
if you ... just... smile
Soz had to write this quick!
here is my smile for u lot
Smile thou ur heart is aching
smile even thou its breaking
although a tear may be ever so near
thats the time you must keep on smiling,
smile whats the use in crying
you'll find that life is still worthwhile
if you ... just... smile
Soz had to write this quick!
Fully, sb that was hysterical
Sanks Ldybg377!
I think diary writing is definately a Pisces trait. This statement "It is odd" should be Pisces too
I think diary writing is definately a Pisces trait. This statement "It is odd" should be Pisces too
LMFAO! @ Brandon!
What critical Virgos they are, huh Pisces?
What critical Virgos they are, huh Pisces?
Hey BlueAngel
Who knows who is watching this site & stealing Ideas!
U so talented mr branh!!
Branh,
"Ascension of the Megalomaniac" is amazing ... it's incredibly engaging along with being abstract. WOW ... for man with so much on his mind. You sure release all of your troubles productively.
"Ascension of the Megalomaniac" is amazing ... it's incredibly engaging along with being abstract. WOW ... for man with so much on his mind. You sure release all of your troubles productively.
Darkness surrounds the entire song but there is also a very beautiful undertone ....
Branh, I sense a rather spiritual element in the third verse as well.
WOW, you are an incredible writer ... it is truly thought provoking.
Branh, I sense a rather spiritual element in the third verse as well.
WOW, you are an incredible writer ... it is truly thought provoking.
Hi us
I agree, a song such as what we just read is beyond aimless! It was very real, but I actually expect something that deep to come from Branh.
I agree, a song such as what we just read is beyond aimless! It was very real, but I actually expect something that deep to come from Branh.
Must have thought of it around the same time sb
Clever thinking 99
Clever thinking 99
You?re just standing there
Haven?t I said enough
I give you all I have to give
Every breath for you shows I care
But you won?t change a thing
Guess this finger don?t fit your rig
I can?t be something I?m not
So you?ll just have to sit here & rot
Move up & move on
A good change couldn?t be wrong
Stay calm I?m still here
We?re not going anywhere
I can?t be your back bone
Cause I can?t even stand alone
You?d love to eat me, swallow me whole
Chew my life & my heart out
And then still stand there in your doubt
Move up & move on
A good change could be wrong
I hope you choke on your mistakes
I?m not the cherry in your cake
I?m saying the words you can?t stand to hear
I?m saying everything loud & clear
So move up & move on
A good change has never been so wrong
Haven?t I said enough
I give you all I have to give
Every breath for you shows I care
But you won?t change a thing
Guess this finger don?t fit your rig
I can?t be something I?m not
So you?ll just have to sit here & rot
Move up & move on
A good change couldn?t be wrong
Stay calm I?m still here
We?re not going anywhere
I can?t be your back bone
Cause I can?t even stand alone
You?d love to eat me, swallow me whole
Chew my life & my heart out
And then still stand there in your doubt
Move up & move on
A good change could be wrong
I hope you choke on your mistakes
I?m not the cherry in your cake
I?m saying the words you can?t stand to hear
I?m saying everything loud & clear
So move up & move on
A good change has never been so wrong
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