When Beautiful Isn't Beautiful.
This topic was created in the Pisces forum by 2ndDecanFish on Wednesday, August 3, 2005 and has 4 replies.
Hello Everyone,
I just wanted to share with you a alent of mines. I'm sure my fellow water signs are familiar with poetry. Tell me what you think of it. Here goes:
"When Beautiful Isn't Beautiful."
Mirror on the wall.
I see me, but I know the truth.
Spare me the flatter,
of the image of my youth.
Beautiful isn't beautiful,
When you hurt awfully at the core.
The type of pain that's only present,
Behind closed doors.
What do you do,
when all of your life,
your this ornament?
Your only gazed upon,
Like a musuem artifact.
When physically there isn't a soul you've met/
For a while untainted,
Forever untouched.
A thought of some such is so. . .Un-beautiful.
By: 2ndDecanFish
I just wanted to share with you a alent of mines. I'm sure my fellow water signs are familiar with poetry. Tell me what you think of it. Here goes:
"When Beautiful Isn't Beautiful."
Mirror on the wall.
I see me, but I know the truth.
Spare me the flatter,
of the image of my youth.
Beautiful isn't beautiful,
When you hurt awfully at the core.
The type of pain that's only present,
Behind closed doors.
What do you do,
when all of your life,
your this ornament?
Your only gazed upon,
Like a musuem artifact.
When physically there isn't a soul you've met/
For a while untainted,
Forever untouched.
A thought of some such is so. . .Un-beautiful.
By: 2ndDecanFish
Hey girl (girl right?)
I'm not fan of writing poems, but I respect the mind power you've spent to write this all.
I'm not fan of writing poems, but I respect the mind power you've spent to write this all.
Nice sheri isn't it or is actually tony this time.But still nice job.
LOL. . . (Damn.) Uh no, Sheri is left town to prepare for college. It's Tony now. I'm a dude Haffo, so no I'm not gay. Te next time I plan on using a message board, I think I'll spare everyone else the confusion and only have one person per user name.
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"When Beautiful Isn't Beautiful."
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